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mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Oct 23, 2018 - 10:26am PT

Along the lines of "candlance," rather than condolence (his bright self remains a light unto our benighted feet):

"Le Beatnik"

The beat goes on though Big Daddy is gone, himself.
Directly you pass "GO" you die.
Is that any way to get to immortality?
Apparently so.
Had he not died, he'd have been just another dirtbagger.
Or would he?
Does anyone really care what level baggage he had?
Did it not matter that he had one thing on his mind?
And that was: Get higher faster.
Good plan, Gary, as keeping up with Layton required more than one could imagine.
You died trying.
You failed falling.
(Royal was no doubt proud of you, his fellow Americain.)
Through no fault of your own, just dumb luck that you died.
A credit to our tribe, much more than just a flash in the pan.
Thanks and Amen.
--mfm
Bushman

climber
The state of quantum flux
Oct 26, 2018 - 02:37am PT
Dreaming back the Howling Beast

Raging the drunk
watched to bar the door
where beyond lurked the demons
of unholy laughter
The fire chief appeared
admonished a warning
the drunk raised his head
but did not hear
Threatened by motives
of authorities at play
the beast was awakened
and quickly emerged

Swinging a radio
by the cord like a lasso
the drunk held his would be
captors at bay
Shouting he leapt forward
accosting the chief
railing bright expletives
in a loathsome rant
Barefoot a kick cleared
the door from its hinges
as the chief and entourage
fled into the night

Fast on their heels
the drunk was to follow
demanding to resign
and collect on his pay
Mixing shots of tequila
and bourbon at his locker
the drunk in his blackout
collapsed on the floor
A handful of crew mates
carried him on their shoulders
he awoke spewing spirits
on the nights conflagration

His place reinstalled
as the fool of the party
his shameful behavior
excused as forlorn
The drunk and his Kryptonite
rose with the sunlight
who he ran from
the mirror refused to conceal
The director requested
he make known his presence
for such animal crackers
would have no place here

The beast had been howling
between his two ears
he never knew then
what he understood now
For the saddest thing
was the hardest he found
he was granted reprieve
but his child was not spared
The beast does not howl
between his two ears
the beast has been howling
out there all along

-bushman
10/23/2018
Bushman

climber
The state of quantum flux
Nov 7, 2018 - 05:53am PT

aloha

weeping the willow uprooted itself
and wandered through the night
this was how it came to be
born of a tree it took up a stone
tearing upon its barked legs
as it wept to escape the dream
of a world beyond this dormancy

a medicine woman found it
and scraped at its scaly wooded bark
attached to cambium like fascia to bone
thinking it knew the limits of its being
it was fallen as time replaced
all that there was it ‘twas loath to believe
unbeknownst to this sapling become me

-bushman
11/07/2018
Fossil climber

Trad climber
Atlin, B. C.
Nov 7, 2018 - 10:08am PT
Well, let's try an erotic tanka:

in a moonstruck lake
boots and trail clothes on the beach
a tentative kiss
cold bodies drew together
and your nipples pierced my heart
Gnome Ofthe Diabase

climber
Out Of Bed
Nov 7, 2018 - 12:32pm PT
It is only roughly three thousand feet
but a sleepless night can make or break the feat


Errant Night

Why fight it

across the room, a tent floor

An errant thought escaped

The old what ifs come swirling in
the fear of fight then flight

A what then if the pro don't hold
Ah it is the old doubt -

not relevant to this ascent

what then, it fell to a belay
there won't be one this time

now
Those ifs and buts start to grow,
giving texture to the feelings
An essence of the pit that fear can relegate
even a climbing fool to.

It can't be stopped
It can't be suppressed
it musn't be held in contempt

there might be something to it
After all,
a fall
would mean an end to it


Can anything be made out
Is this a warning to bug out


A crawling sense of dread
is growing somewhere

Down deep, It can't be stopped
It can't be suppressed
it musn't be held in contempt
there might be something to it
It can't be stopped
It can't be suppressed
it has been tried to no avail
leading that time to a bail



The doubts are not unfounded
We do not play inside
not on the hardwood floor
This aint basketball

Rocks of size -or not- breed doubts
Doubts about choices

Life's choices

Decisions turn the nut
good or bad
going up
continuing
it is one of those actions
you cannot reverse


Doubts like children
ones own they start to grow up

Fast they take on a life of their own

They start to glow,flashing behind closed eyes
The Light keeps the climber up
Being light keeps a climber up
An errant thought has grown , it is only 2 am
Prone at eleven, was there any sleep

Surely no rem, but some drowsy shut-eye
At two am to start to climb, arriving then,
Disturbing they and them that are mid climb
already ensconced in the rock crannies

those them that too have been fighting doubts
that have been also trying
while ascending to find sleep
in that
Elusive Errant Night







Bushman

climber
The state of quantum flux
Nov 8, 2018 - 05:07am PT
Nursery Mimes

Mairzy doats and dozy doats
and liddle lamzy divey

And very few things I hate worse
than dreaded poison ivy

This old man, he plays one
He plays knick knack on my thumb

Tooth picks keep my eyes open
while television makes make me dumb

The itsy bitsy spider
Climbed up the waterspout

You’re so captivating that
my heart’s in chains and can’t get out

Little miss Muffet she sat on her tuffet
eating her curds eating and whey

Sometimes I need my coffee like
a sunrise on a brand new day

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall,
Humpty Dumpty had a great fall

It's life's illusions I recall
I really don't know life at all

-bushman, joni, and the merry rhymesters
Gnome Ofthe Diabase

climber
Out Of Bed
Nov 8, 2018 - 05:12am PT
Coffee for the Soul, It a pleasure to occupy the same page even if it shows my poor form.
Hope the sun is shinning on your hart and that winds of strength bouy you and the clan as you search for peace and comfort.
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 8, 2018 - 07:55am PT
Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water.
They did something risky cuz he got frisky
And nine months later there was a daughter.

Her name was Bo Peep and she herded some sheep,
And had a young swain named Tommy Tucker...
I think we can move on, folks, because I agreed to abide by the SuperTopo Content Policy
and the rules and restrictions therein.
Bushman

climber
The state of quantum flux
Nov 8, 2018 - 08:08am PT
swoop-de-loop

I lied to get in
then broke all the rules
it’s probably the greatest
comb over in history
now who’s the fool?

-arungutung
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 8, 2018 - 09:27am PT
LOFL here.
Bushman

climber
The state of quantum flux
Nov 10, 2018 - 06:06am PT

absinthe makes the smart go blonder

in searching for a song
this just happened along
oh say what you will
about the Whippoorwill
I was sure that bird said
now quit while you’re ahead
but on listening very still
then I heard its Whip-Poor-Will

now whatever Will did
that this bird had his fill
of boys who would be boys
abundant with their toys
some so eager for the spoils
being reckless to find foils
laying waste to all the world
for the banners they unfurled

oh say what you would
of the birdsong in the wood
I would correlate their worth
with the value of our mirth
in those places undefiled
and refuges of the wild
where for one I’d rather go
to sit and watch the river flow

I love you son
wherever you are

-bushman
11/10/2018
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 12, 2018 - 10:07am PT
I would bewail in manner of tragedy
The harm of them who stood in high degree
And fell so far, there was no remedy
To rescue them from their adversity.
For know this when Fortune wishes to flee
No man may her delay, nor fate withhold
Let no man trust in blind prosperity.
Beware of these examples, true and old!

--Chaucer, "The Monk's Tale"

"We know we are writing tragedy when our verses weep for Fortune's assault on the proud."
--Chaucer

"Hubba hubba!"
--Marlow
Fossil climber

Trad climber
Atlin, B. C.
Nov 12, 2018 - 08:20pm PT
Not sure about content restrictions here. Is very soft eroticism passable? This is retrieved from that first great heartbreak, 61 years ago.

// Cosette

Last night you came back to me in a dream.
You were with me absolutely,
more real than I am to myself now.
Even the warm scent of you was there.

In blind love you slid over me,
slender thighs clasping mine,
warm sleek belly,
breasts pushing for my heart
and finding it.
Long dark hair a curtain
shutting out the needless world.

I could not lie still.

My hips rose to meet you,
rising to enter heaven, and…

You were gone.

I was alone.
You were gone.

My love is gone.

W.


Italic Text
Bushman

climber
The state of quantum flux
Nov 12, 2018 - 09:58pm PT
^^^^
Wayne, I like that one.
Erotic, warm, sad.

Gnome Ofthe Diabase

climber
Out Of Bed
Nov 12, 2018 - 10:51pm PT
A Funky Placed Link to The Flames


in my haste

Ive made paste

it is all gud

twas but now tis

a right gud mention

In the wrong place

A deficit of savvy

A deficit of care

As to where is was postin'

Where I was a`posting

have`r you nothing to say

For the great gudly skills

The God given ability

of young William Apostol?


it will only take a minute

[Click to View YouTube Video]

this is 17 minutes long - two weeks ago[https://youtube=SAAxsxh04I0]
something familiar,
[Click to View YouTube Video]
if the twang isn't to much , his own writing is on display
on the studio album version of Turmoil & Tin Foil

https://youtu.be/N5ZCbrcjrA4

( Dust In A Baggie)[Click to View YouTube Video]Com'on-now!!

Vulfpeck,
1/2 way down the page
after

on The Flames 10 daze ago!

http://www.supertopo.com/climbing/thread.php?topic_id=2607974&tn=16960
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 13, 2018 - 02:05am PT
owed to locker

locker the mocker
locker the talker
locker the rocker
now locker, the focker
is locker the lurker

mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 16, 2018 - 06:21am PT
Bhang and Whang on Changabang was such an epic story.
They smacked and whacked a crack, Jack, and climbed their way to glory.
Bushman

climber
The state of quantum flux
Nov 16, 2018 - 07:13am PT

Annatuk

At half past sunset
Annatuk took her leave
winding down mountain roads

Then we saw her at Christmas
fresh faced and laughing
she ran with the children

We talked about family
how some nursed their grudges
or never got closure

And of others who bounded
defied expectations
Annatuk being so humble

The last letter she sent us
snapshots of Italy
San Gimignano onto Florence tomorrow

As I dog sit the hoard
awaiting their return
from their travels abroad

Annatuk with her brood
along with her Andre
she never stops long for the sun

-bushman
11/16/2018
Jim Clipper

climber
Nov 16, 2018 - 07:22am PT
Bushman, was it you who mentioned R. Brautigan


?




Gnome Ofthe Diabase

climber
Out Of Bed
Nov 16, 2018 - 07:24am PT
nO tHAT'D BE MOI






this is why we can't have nice things
and why the 1st amendment is under attack


NOT REAL SORRY FOR THE ALL CAPs
ON ONE OF THE STUPIDEST THREADS WE HAVE SEEN IN A LONG TIME
AT THE END OF THE 1ST PAGE
I LEFT THIS STEAMER
NOW MOVED HERE ,
REPLACED WITH WHAT EVEN THE SIMPLETONS WILL GRASP

but I like my itailian
My rant a shjtton
SO
HERE, EMBARRASSINGLY

& TO BE FOLLOWED BY SWEET CUPS OF WATER SOME CALL TEA

HERE IT IS IN ALL IT'S GLORIFIED MESS, CORRECTED FOR MISTYPES & TYPOS

PHOOK U IDJUTS i WAS ALMOST A NEIGHBOR.
LOOK UP BRIARCLIFF MANNER ON A MAP.
THERE IS A BIG HARD CLIFF IN ARMONK
ALL RIGHT AROUND THE CLUSTERFLUX
THAT IS Chappaqua

LOOK AT THE WAY GNOMISH COMES THEN GOES AWAY IF i GOTTA SOMETHING TO SPRAY.

MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU IN sODOM, yOU GOT gAMORHRED FOR CAUSE
IT MUST BE HARD TO SEE THERE.
WHAT WITH ALL THE THICK WOODS - WHAT WITH ALL THE TREES
WAIT, FIRE LIKE NEVER SEEN BEFORE?
ABSOLUTELY BIBLICAL BURN DOWN
APOCTILIPRICAL

NO TREES TO BLOCK YOUR SIGHT?
NO CLEAN AIR TO SATE YOUR PLIGHT

YOU HAVE NOT LEARNED
YOU DID NOT LEARN YOUR CATECHISM


POWER NEVER RELENTS OR GIVES BACK

YOU SHOULD KNOW WHATS COMING
THEY HAVE GOT YOU ALL BY THE SHORT HAIRS

ON YOUR KNEES
YOUR YAPS OPEN

THAT TONGUE STUD GREASED WITH MRE (Meals Ready to Eat)
SWALLOW WHEN MUSHROOM-HEAD-ICKY STEPS ASIDE
AND PUTS HIS PENCE DOWN TO YOUR TONSILS

Pence/Rohrbacher -2020

i HAVE TO TAKE A BREATH, ITS SNOWING HERE
EVERYTHING IS FRESH, CLEAN WASHED AIR
PILLOWS OF WHITE EVERYWHERE.
TWICE THE TAXBITE
THREE TIMES THE COST OF LIVING

EXISTING IN A FIRE PIT
YOU CALL THAT LIVING?


Now i'm gonna go write my name in the new fallen snow
with my pee
Then I have to shovel it
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