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mouse from merced
Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
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Bushman rackin' 'em up and clearing the table
Can't tell if it's a poem or if it's a fable
I can't bear it.
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oldguy
climber
Bronx, NY
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ENTROPY 2
The northwest face of Half Dome is sheer, seemingly
smooth, cut by a geologic knife like a ball
of cheese. But a closer look, as if through
a microscope, reveals ledges and cracks,
a finer structure sculpted by weather and time.
Fifteen hundred feet from the ground I found
a large flake, several feet thick, over a hundred
high. (It can be seen in an Adams photograph.)
My back against the wall, my feet pressing
the flake, I inched up. The flake's edge hung
out to the right like a curtain in the wings.
Half way up, sweating, I stopped to look
through a four-inch gap splitting the flake
like a cookie, to look at the valley
a mile down. They called it Psyche Flake.
It gave me pause, then I kept climbing,
carefully, my feet pushing just enough
to hold. At the top and to the left,
where the flake joined the wall, the accumulated
rocks shifted as I sought firm ground.
One winter, a few years later, the whole thing came off.
Joe Fitschen
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Bushman
climber
The state of quantum flux
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Sep 11, 2016 - 10:57am PT
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(With edits)
Klutz Foot
High upon the ridge top
The climber walks alone
His partner has gone ahead
After a long and grueling climb
He works his way down the descent
Jaded by worldly troubles
He's introspect
And trouble free
For the moment by
Exploits on high
Innocent as to what might be
As often we all are
He places feet down between
The boulders and the scrub oak
Between roots
To find the climbers path
And like mountain goats
With measured leaps
But as though each step
Might be his last
With pleasure
And gratitude
He spies the rap route anchors
There
Lowering himself to clip in
With his pack
From anchor point to anchor point
The water ran out long ago
Exhaustion shows upon his brow
As sweat still comes to neck and wrists
He works the kinks
Untwists the twists
And pulls the ropes from the last rappel
With chafed
And grimy hands
The loose rocks in the gully shift
Under every step until
He links together paths on down
But with every pounding footfall
His socks have failed
Where friction's worn
As blisters form
With the familiar burn
A thousand feet or more
In elevation left to go
Back to the established trails
And home
There waiting he sees the sight of gear
His partner splayed across a stone
An unattractive site
This weary pair
On gentler ground now
Though laden as they walk along
They're feeling lighter still
And see their car
Just down this hill
Cold beverages and showers compel
The one misstep
-bushman
09/11/2016
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Bushman
climber
The state of quantum flux
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The other day I was getting ready to post this.
I accidentally deleted the entire poem and had to
remember and rewrite it in it's entirety.
It came out much different than the original,
oh well, such is life.
The Guidebook
The route is most impossible
Though common it's still unknown
For both mortals and demigods
Where the eagle's have not yet flown
Just north of Babylon
Take a left near the old brothel
From the base of a fiery lake
Take the pillar of the apostle
And the guidebook said
To young Wilbur Sands
Climb for a hundred pitches
With your feet and with your hands
Though it took all month
The guidebook was non de script
Except for the divorce
And the broken hip
And atop the soaring pillar
A mighty headwall loomed
The cracks were all rotten
And prevalent with doom
But the guidebook said
To find a good woman
Who won't mention the wife
T'was late advice for Wilbur then
So he cast off probing weaknesses
As insipid as his own
When the rains began in earnest
He thought that he would drown
On what tears the gods shed freely
Wilbur might've taken the plunge
Off route and lost among the clouds
With only demons to expunge
Flickering it's last the headlamp bulb
Illuminated a single theme
"Exit by way of rivets
Up a dike of serpentine"
The lonely hammock swayed
Hanging off a row of pins
Engulfed by storm and clouds
On a climb that had no end
Wilbur's socked in bivouac
A long and lonely plight
Day on day
And night on night
Lifted morning of the fifth day
Last he was seen on the summit ridge
On the knife edged powdery white
With shouldered pack high on a ledge
The guidebook was never clear
Alas crystal realm negotiations
Oft times they go awry
As do earthly expectations
From beneath our clouded respite
We might find the safety of a home
In whatever warm hearth finds us
Or on high where we should ever roam
This strange magic allure
So desolate and replete
On such totems we rely on
With parched lips and wet feet
The guidebook never tells us
Which route we might be on
But we're still up there somewhere
Corporeal or eidolon
Just north of Babylon
Take a left near the old brothel
From the base of a fiery lake
Take the pillar of the apostle
One hundred pitches give or take
Then you're in it for the long haul
That's when the true climbing begins
Between the tempest and the lull
The doorbell rang
Just once once that day
Wilbur's son answered
In his way
A worn and weathered
Package came
With a guidebook that bore
His father's name
-Tim Sorenson
09/30/2016
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Loyd
Big Wall climber
Roseburg, OR
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Yosemite
This sir, surely is the gateway to my heaven.
The Valley of light, waterfalls, and hard granite walls,
Second unto none other.
El Cap, the master. Half Dome, the mother.
I, her son, her mate, my master.
Higher Rock, my elder brother is.
Bold and strong, stand he tall.
Middle Rock, my sister is, beauty incomparable has she,
Facing north while setting sun slides gently towards west.
Oh, to sit upon my younger brother’s shoulder, Lower Cathedral,
and see the first rays of morning light touch my master’s brow.
To quote a friend is, “To be amazed.”
Born to the rock and life on a vertical wall.
To death, this life I chose to live, and would have none other.
Loyd Price
November 21 1966
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Fossil climber
Trad climber
Atlin, B. C.
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Hey Loyd! Delighted to see you on the Taco!! Good stuff!
Wayne
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Bushman
climber
The state of quantum flux
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The Falcon's Call
The falcon told me where to go
Where he would lead I did not know
Over hill and yonder dell
I followed him there without fail
The falcon told me what to do
And if you heard you'd follow too
In sacred words he led me where
I stood to say a silent prayer
The falcon circled in the sky
Over this soul I knew not why
I was not dying that I knew
But I let him show me what to do
Of what he spoke I could not say
In language of the birds that day
His message was in wing-ed sign
Of serendipitous design
The falcon said come follow me
A peregrine of rapt beauty
He mesmerized me with a spell
To believe that I could fly as well
The falcon signaled me to go
To follow with my heart and soul
With losses born until I wept
My freedoms exercised and kept
The falcon spoke then flew away
To leave me 'till another day
That I might hold and should revere
The raptors grace to me so dear
The falcon was a harbinger
Of hidden destinies stranger
Than death as now a welcome friend
Ushering mercifully to the end
But the falcon warned and cried aloud
To the stay alert beware the shroud
It was not now my time to die
He said this then I know not why
The falcon spoke to me by name
You might consider this insane
But had you seen him on that day
Would you have heard what he did say?
The falcon lives here on this earth
And shares with us our place of birth
From ancient times until beyond
Our spirits share a sacred bond
The falcon calls for those who hear
For due respect and reverent fear
And a zephyr to alight upon
With a lonesome cry and mournful song
-bushman
10/01/2016
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Bushman
climber
The state of quantum flux
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The Sovereignty of the Self
Winding along I ask
Can a person be an island
Unto themselves
Solitary, introspect?
Is it dangerous ground?
Like the bag man
Or bag lady
Rattling off the day to day
Mundane conversations...
Whatever is in the mind out loud
"I can't, yes you can,
I'm not schizophrenic,
Oh yes, you are!"
Troubling to say
In the least
So how else would we survive
Being cast away?
Or trapped in a coal mine
If we couldn't escape?
Being faced with our thoughts
And nobody else's
For what would seem like an eternity
Where the right hand mimics the right hand
And the left hand mimics the left
-bushman
10/06/2016
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mouse from merced
Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
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I'm also delighted to see your poem, Loyd.
Welcome to the poet's camp.
Up There
Wishin' I was fishin' in Cascades
Instead of watchin' the parades
Of autos sneakin' in to my private paradise.
It's fine up there on Sickle,
Where I wished I had a pickle,
To accent the taste of my sardines.
It's just so long ago
That I don't really know
When I've had more fun.
It's hard to think that I climbed that
When I was a young ledge rat
Freezing in the shadows and sweating in the sun.
MFM/10-07-16
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Flip Flop
climber
Earth Planet, Universe
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Roses are red
People suck
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Bushman
climber
The state of quantum flux
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^^^
Apt
I'm nominating flip flop for a Pulitzer.
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Fossil climber
Trad climber
Atlin, B. C.
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Wow - things just keep getting better!
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Marlow
Sport climber
OSLO
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Olav H. Hauge
There are similarities between his relationship to nature and his relationship to folk poetry and other types of folklore, Old Norse and Western tradition, classical Chinese poetry and Japanese Haikus, as well as Eastern religion: primarily Zen Buddhism. Hauge evinces an immediate empathy with these traditions. He seems to speak directly with and with familiarity about Acestes (from the Aeneid); figures from the classical Chinese era; and characters from early Nordic tradition, such as Ogmund of Spånheim (from The Saga of Håkon Håkonsson), Leif Eiriksson and others. Such poems are also often meta-texts, such as “I have three Poems”. It tells of Emily Dickinson who wrote so many poems, but published hardly any: “she just cut open a packet of tea / and wrote another one.” This is how poems should be, they should ”…smell of tea. / Or of raw earth and freshly split wood.”
I Stop below the Old Oak on a Rainy Day
My own translation
It’s not only the rain
that makes me stop
under the old oak
by the road. It’s
safe under the wide
crown, it must be
old friendship that lead
the old oak and me to stand there
in silence, listening to the rain
dripping on the leaves, looking out
at the grey day,
waiting, understanding.
The world is old, we think,
both getting older.
Today I don’t stand here dry,
the leaves have started to fall,
there is a sour smell in the
moist air, I feel
the drops through my hair.
Olav H. Hauge
It's the Dream
Translated by Robin Fulton
It's the dream we carry in secret
that something miraculous will happen,
that it must happen –
that time will open
that the heart will open
that doors will open
that the mountains will open
that springs will gush –
that the dream will open,
that one morning we will glide into
some little harbour we didn't know was there.
Olav H. Hauge
It's the Dream: The poetry of Olav H. Hauge: http://www.boloji.com/index.cfm?md=Content&sd=PoemArticle&PoemArticleID=78
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mouse from merced
Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
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Persimmons
by Li-young Lee
1986
In sixth grade Mrs. Walker
slapped the back of my head
and made me stand in the corner
for not knowing the difference
between persimmon and precision.
How to choose
persimmons. This is precision.
Ripe ones are soft and brown-spotted.
Sniff the bottoms. The sweet one
will be fragrant. How to eat:
put the knife away, lay down newspaper.
Peel the skin tenderly, not to tear the meat.
Chew the skin, suck it,
and swallow. Now, eat
the meat of the fruit,
so sweet,
all of it, to the heart.
Donna undresses, her stomach is white.
In the yard, dewy and shivering
with crickets, we lie naked,
face-up, face-down.
I teach her Chinese.
Crickets: chiu chiu. Dew: I’ve forgotten.
Naked: I’ve forgotten.
Ni, wo: you and me.
I part her legs,
remember to tell her
she is beautiful as the moon.
Other words
that got me into trouble were
fight and fright, wren and yarn.
Fight was what I did when I was frightened,
Fright was what I felt when I was fighting.
Wrens are small, plain birds,
yarn is what one knits with.
Wrens are soft as yarn.
My mother made birds out of yarn.
I loved to watch her tie the stuff;
a bird, a rabbit, a wee man.
Mrs. Walker brought a persimmon to class
and cut it up
so everyone could taste
a Chinese apple. Knowing
it wasn’t ripe or sweet, I didn’t eat
but watched the other faces.
My mother said every persimmon has a sun
inside, something golden, glowing,
warm as my face.
Once, in the cellar, I found two wrapped in newspaper,
forgotten and not yet ripe.
I took them and set both on my bedroom windowsill,
where each morning a cardinal
sang, The sun, the sun.
Finally understanding
he was going blind,
my father sat up all one night
waiting for a song, a ghost.
I gave him the persimmons,
swelled, heavy as sadness,
and sweet as love.
This year, in the muddy lighting
of my parents’ cellar, I rummage, looking
for something I lost.
My father sits on the tired, wooden stairs,
black cane between his knees,
hand over hand, gripping the handle.
He’s so happy that I’ve come home.
I ask how his eyes are, a stupid question.
All gone, he answers.
Under some blankets, I find a box.
Inside the box I find three scrolls.
I sit beside him and untie
three paintings by my father:
Hibiscus leaf and a white flower.
Two cats preening.
Two persimmons, so full they want to drop from the cloth.
He raises both hands to touch the cloth,
asks, Which is this?
This is persimmons, Father.
Oh, the feel of the wolftail on the silk,
the strength, the tense
precision in the wrist.
I painted them hundreds of times
eyes closed. These I painted blind.
Some things never leave a person:
scent of the hair of one you love,
the texture of persimmons,
in your palm, the ripe weight.
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Bushman
climber
The state of quantum flux
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On a day when anything can happen...
Fluorescent Paisley Coyotes under the Moon
There in Dogtown
Barked a lonely Coyote
Short on sleep
And high on peyote
She slaked her thirst
On a leftover beer
And ate of some pizza
From a box that was near
Where some climbers slept
Off a drunken debauch
With their table still littered
By their evenings launch
To another dimension
Where they'd swooped and soared
But now they lie sleeping
And loudly snored
And the coyote sneered
At their indiscretion
Though couldn't complain of
The psychotropic selection
And the pizza with shrooms
Psilocybin the type
Combined with mescaline
Left the brain moist and ripe
For unusual visions
And delusional forms
Of an identity crisis
Beyond all the norms
Was the coyote the dreamer
Or only the dream?
Was her mind just the sound
Of the howl or the scream?
So she tried out her voice
At the top of her scale
While she stood on the table
And let loose a wail
And the rattling vibration
Made the crescent moon shift
Spilling out some stars
Down into the drift
Which bounced off the heads
The the startled young men
Who had leaped from their tents
And into the din
Where a paisley coyote
Of fluorescent on wing
Hovered over their heads
And proceeded to sing
Their site it was empty
When their friends came to peak
At the last night's commotion
'Twas the loudest all week
And a search was begun
Through the rocks and beyond
For the partying climbers
Who'd gone missing that dawn...
They found them all huddled
Under Joshua Trees
All shivering and frightened
Picking quills from their knees
Where they'd run through the darkness
With sheer terror and fright
From a flying coyote
In the cold desert night
-bushman
10/09/2016
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Bushman
climber
The state of quantum flux
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I'll have check that out...
Kumbayah
We used to sing Kumbayah
Around the fire
And campfire songs
In Idyllwild
A Christian camp
My parents worked
As counselors
My brother first saw
Old Tahquitz Rock
High on mountain side
As years went by
We worked there too
The garbage detail
Tobin had
I washed more dishes then
Than I ever imagined
But I never imagined
One day the climb would come
I was too young
And out of shape
So I just carried the rope up
While Tobin and friend
Climbed the left ski track
Tobin led his first route
The other guy
Grunted and flailed on top rope
I carried the rope back
Terrified
The years passed
My brother's legacy
Culminated
Fulfilling the prophecy
In a weird way
My earliest memory
A first dream
On passage back from
Overseas
Where Tobin first saw
The mighty alps
How could I know...
How could I know?
Such irony
As a sailors caps flew off the deck
So go our dreams
It's all we have
Who we love
Who we care about
Never aloof
Permanently
We're made to see
-Tim Sorenson
10/09/2016
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Fossil climber
Trad climber
Atlin, B. C.
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This was written as prose, but it is absolutely poetry. Read it aloud, slowly. Listen. You can hear it. You're there.
If I Were the Wind
The wind that makes music in November corn is in a hurry. The stalks hum, the loose husks whisk skyward in half-playful swirls, and the wind hurries on.
In the marsh, long windy waves surge across the grass sloughs, beat against the far willows. A tree tries to argue, bare limbs waving, but there is no detaining the wind.
On the sandbar there is only the wind, and the river sliding seaward. Every wisp of grass is drawing circles on the sand.
I wander over the bar to a driftwood log, where I sit and listen to the universal roar, and the tinkle of wavelets on the shore. The river is lifeless: not a duck, heron, marsh hawk, or gull but has sought refuge from wind.
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Out of the clouds I hear a faint bark, as of a far-away dog. It is strange how the world cocks its ears at that sound, wondering. Soon it is louder: the honk of geese, invisible, but coming on.
The flock emerges from the low clouds, a tattered banner of birds, dipping and rising, blown up and blown down, blown together and blown apart, but advancing, the wind wrestling lovingly with each winnowing wing. When the flock is a blur in the far sky I hear the last honk, sounding taps for summer.
**
It is warm behind the driftwood now, for the wind has gone with the geese. So would I - if I were the wind.
Aldo Leopold, Sand County Almanac
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Marlow
Sport climber
OSLO
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Beautiful poetry. I can easily see this, feel this...:
The flock emerges from the low clouds, a tattered banner of birds, dipping and rising, blown up and blown down, blown together and blown apart, but advancing, the wind wrestling lovingly with each winnowing wing. When the flock is a blur in the far sky I hear the last honk, sounding taps for summer.
Even "violent" prose sometimes have this poetic quality. This is from Cormac McCarthy's Blood Meridian:
Already you could see through the dust on the ponies’ hides the painted chevrons and the hands and rising suns and birds and fish of every device like the shade of old work through sizing on a canvas and now too you could hear above the pounding of unshod hooves the piping of the quena, flutes made from human bones, and some among the company had begun to saw back on their mounts and some to mill in confusion when up from the offside of those ponies there rose a fabled horde of mounted lancers and archers bearing shields bedight with bits of broken mirrorglass that cast a thousand unpieced suns against the eyes of their enemies. A legion of horribles, hundreds in number, half naked or clad in costumes attic or biblical or wardrobed out of a fevered dream with the skins of animals and silk finery and pieces of uniform still tracked with the blood of prior owners, coats of slain dragoons, frogged and braided cavalery jackets, one in a stovepipe hat and one with an umbrella and one in white stockings and a bloodstained weddingveil and some in headgear of cranefeathers or rawhide helmets that bore the horns of bull or buffalo and one in a pigeontailed coat worn backwards and otherwise and one in the armor of a Spanish conquistador, the breastplate and pauldrons deeply dented with old blows of mace or sabre done in another country by men whose very bones were dust and many with their braids spliced up with the hair of other beasts until they trailed upon the ground and their horses’ ears and tails worked with bits of brightly colored cloth and one whose horse’s whole head was painted crimsom red and all the horsemen’s faces gaudy and grotesque with daubings like a company of mounted clowns, death hilarious, all howling in a barbarous tongue and riding down upon them like a horde from a hell more horrible yet than the brimstone land of Christian reckoning, screeching and yammering and clothed in smoke like those vaporous beings in regions beyond right knowing where the eye wanders and the lip jerks and drools.
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