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Gnome Ofthe Diabase

climber
Out Of Bed
Nov 3, 2014 - 12:36pm PT
The first time I stayed trough the end of the season in the valley.
While I had seen photos of early snow, that caught me intrigue, the hush of the place compared to the noise pollution of only weeks before, had never been described.
Some where someone had turned off the flow switch.

At the time it even seemed like the world spun one way for all most everyone else.
and spun the other way for me.

November fourth, then the sixteenth, then in the mornings
the snowmelt would re freeze, the glaze with a dark wet streak
shines and glistens as sunlight plays with growing shade.

Car doors closing and alarm chirps
The background cacophony that droned in alert ears
Just a month ago are replaced with a skeet shooting like game
DID YOU SEE THAT- Turn your head and stare as the ice,
sheets of verglas
come crashing down. That is cool, a must see show.
The first time that I was smart enough to listen to my hart,
and stayed in the valley till only the few and that last November light
I wish I had seen a New Years sunrise from a wall
what was the question ? When I realized that I Should Never leave
YOSEMITE winter, spring summer, or fall. In so many ways I stayed. I took some of the valley with me where ever I roamed.

mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 6, 2014 - 06:10pm PT
PASS

its been nearly 20 years since i drove it
living out there is like dreaming
the highway takes off west of town
rising over the pass
in the shadow of pikes peak

thinking about travelers of the past
this highway
my truck flying up it
magic carpets
over millions of years

looking at those mountains
the walls and the shadows
beneath me
Gnome Ofthe Diabase

climber
Out Of Bed
Nov 6, 2014 - 11:03pm PT
Four nine nine is a tough number
Almost 500 it is one away from that a biblical age
Who was that old?
(I tell anyone that dares to ask that I am forty nine and a half at seventy it will a good joke be)

My Old Testament is to rusty to open

Noah ? No ahh it was Abraham 1st last most ghost

frigg that marble rye won't toast and seeds lead to a dental emergency

that dawg don't call or hunt if called a runny count so let's not call a cat a dog
or a dawg a cool kat. (not callin boodawg any thing )not speaking is choice as well
? a bartered peace if the duplicitous cod piece you will wear
who would know and why do any care?
if it is for protection then I will wear it
but to HAVE to
oto , is to not be free
a cup will not stop a blow to the taint which is to say unt
running has been no thing
for me
for thirty years I stand
Stand and if not love
then fight

to take one in and savour the spice and roll another then hit it twice is freedom
that it is all that
is enough but add scoffing at the powers
while harnessing the lion of Selasie
makes the puff puff that floats on the breeze
attracts Richards the great but also big dicks
(but you dare not say slurs that's right ihkuonts a female more than once
put that where it should be)
Not in the thrown pipe that I also left out of the better memory early yesterday
Bushman

Social climber
The island of Tristan da Cunha
Nov 7, 2014 - 06:15am PT

'Empty Spaces'

To prove that I am nothing,
What have I to lose,
So let me take my leave,
If it would so amuse,
To chum the ocean full and rife,

The proposition that I go,
Would leave no empty space,
Void to fill the void,
How then the disgrace,
And what then of my family life,

Where trinkets and spare change,
With pet hair, lint, and green,
The yellowed photographs,
Aging brittle and unseen,
Are hiding out with my old knife,

The leaves that crunch and rustle,
As the autumn winds do blow,
Empty stepping spaces are what's left,
Where memories once did go,
And failing this my only strife,

Now all is stripped away,
There's nothing left to hide,
What dignity I'd hoped for,
In this short and frail reside,
Has been imparted to my wife.

-bushman
11/07/2014

Largo

Sport climber
The Big Wide Open Face
Nov 7, 2014 - 09:24am PT
LUSH LIFE (Billy Strayhorn)

I used to visit all the very gay places
Those come what may places
Where one relaxes on the axis of the wheel of life
To get the feel of life from jazz and cocktails

The girls I knew had sad and sullen gray faces
With distant gay traces
That used to be there you could see
Where they'd been washed away
By too many through the day, twelve o'clock tales

Then you came along with your siren song
To tempt me to madness
I thought for a while that your poignant smile
Was tinged with the sadness of a great love for me

Ah yes, I was wrong
Again, I was wrong

Life is lonely again
And only last year everything seemed so sure
Now life is awful again

A troughful of hearts could only be a bore
A week in Paris will ease the bite of it
All I care is to smile in spite of it

Ill forget you, I will
While yet you are still burning inside my brain
Romance is mush, stifling those who strive
Ill live a lush life in some small dive

And there Ill be, while I rot
With the rest of those whose lives are lonely, too


Third quatrain swaps out the magic for terms and catch phrases, but the overall vibe is lonely and distant, like cool jazz.

A stark version of the same adventure was trotted out few years ago by ZZ Tops (Mescalero). Thar she blows:

-


"Goin So Good"

Just when I had the money to spend
And I was always thinkin' it would never end
Then the time came, to the end of the game
Don't you know?

And just when the sky got shiny and bright
There never seemed to be an end of the light
But then the clouds came, it started to rain
Don't you know?

Just when it was goin'
Just when it was goin' so good
Just when it...
Just when it was goin' so good

Just when the highway straightend out for a mile
An' I was thinkin' I just cruise for a while
A fork in the road brought a new episode
Don't you know?

Just when it,
Just when it was goin' so good
Just when it was goin'
Just when it was goin' so good

But baby don't you worry
I said baby don't you cry
We're gonna get it together
And I know you're askin' why

Just when it,
Just when it was goin' so good
Just when it was goin'
Just when it was goin' so good

mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 7, 2014 - 01:37pm PT
DAM THE ZIGGURATS! FULL SPEED AHEAD!

Spill.

Dish it.

Open says me.

I hope everything Otay today.

One day at a time, one twinge at a time.

Dying is easy. Comedy is hard. Life's funny that way.

This is an easy leftward traverse leading up to the top of the spillway.

You can do it you can do it you can do it you can do it you can do it, you can.

They just pulled the plug on our elevator here in Middle Earth.

We now need to climb the stairs for what it's worth.

The easy path is not for such as us.

We just fuss & fuss & fuss.

But we get the job done.

Rule number one.

Gotta be fun.

I'm done.

MFM

Gnome Ofthe Diabase

climber
Out Of Bed
Nov 7, 2014 - 01:56pm PT
MFM

I’m done

Gotta be fun

Rule number one

But we get the job done

We just fuss & fuss & fuss

The easy path is not for such as us

We now need to climb the stairs for what it’s worth

They just pulled the plug on our elevator here in middle earth

You can do it you can do it you can do it you can do it you can do it,you
Can.

This is an easy leftward traverse leading up to the top of the spillway.

Dying is easy. Comedy is hard. Life's funny that way.

One day at a time, one twinge at a time.

I hope everything Otay today.

Open says me.

Dish it.

Spill.

DAM THE ZIGGURATS! FULL SPEED AHEAD!


full credit is due to the fine poet

who's verse I just reversed

The master
The Mouse From Merced









Don"t Burn Me down
with this electric hook up
It should happen by itself
I have some thing more to add
That it is cheeky
It might be "bad" bait
So I will think and wait
The flames might be
A better fate
Bushman

Social climber
The island of Tristan da Cunha
Nov 7, 2014 - 05:43pm PT
'There's no time like yesterday'

These are the difficult years,
When I was young and unaware that time was exponentially advancing,
I wasted time on every foolish whimsey,

Feeling bored most of the time,

I was lucky all the time and was so oblivious to my state of decline,
Everything was fine,
I never knew I walked the line,

Advancing was time's arrow but for me there was no straight and narrow,

"Look at all those squares," I said
"Why worry about tomorrow,"
I thought I had an unlimited supply of irreverence,

Little did I know that it would manifest itself through pain,

This is the dark depressing side of my psyche,
That I would harbor such regret and self loathing for all the wasted moments,
All the idle hours of self indulgence and self pity,

Falling so short in bitter disappointment,

What was yesterday will not be redeemed,
So even in this hour of moody reflection,
I waste away my time,

As if I had all the time in the world to care.

-Bushman
11/07/2014

mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 7, 2014 - 06:44pm PT
ODE: THEM GOLDEN MISSES

Grave Alice and golden-haired Edith
Lay in wait for me under the stairs;
Laughing Allegra, too, underneath,
Hoping to catch me all unawares.

They are planning to smother my face
With lovingly placed little kisses
Just now I dare not slacken my pace
For I love my three little misses.

Thx, RLS/The Childrens' Hr.


Bushman

Social climber
The island of Tristan da Cunha
Nov 9, 2014 - 02:59am PT
'Walking With Her on Sunday'

"Lets walk down to the gravelly brick yard
to watch the crows fly,"
Their eyes are on the scraps of carrion left over from the
turkey shoot yesterday,

"Rotting turkey flesh is so tasty!"
says the crow with the short left wing,
He always flies counterclockwise
that way,

There in the morning paper
we saw the earthquake warnings,
"I love that freight train rumbly grinding feeling,"
she would say,

"What feeling?" I reply
and try to think of a way to change the subject,
"Turkey jerking, I mean, turkey jerky's pretty good,"
I stumble away,

She gives me that
"why do men always think of sex" look again,
I plot the various possibilities of that
particular Sunday,

She's still giving me the look
and I still haven't changed the subject,
I want to get back early but of course
she wants to stay,

I'm walking along balancing on the old railroad track
in the cool morning air,
"Yeah," she says, "I like turkey jerky,
it tastes okay."

-bushman
11/09/2014
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 9, 2014 - 09:15am PT
[Click to View YouTube Video]The Another Version Thread shows Samuel L. Jackson reading this.
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 9, 2014 - 09:39am PT
JOHN HOOKER BLUES

I want to know, yes, I want to know:
Who put the poo in the spring, my friends?
Was it one of you? Cuz it wasn't me.
Was it some john?
Some dude hangin' out
Lookin for some toosh?

Ch.
My baby climbin Half Dome
He not be climbin me

And now he don't feel so proud
About eating just Clif Bars
And nothing else.
But he's not selling any alibis:
He's switched to bacon bars, that's no lie.


Gnome Ofthe Diabase

climber
Out Of Bed
Nov 11, 2014 - 06:53pm PT

11/11/14 Veterans Remembrance Day


And the stars blew through the sky.

they were never told 'A reason why'.

just ...do and do and do

And if you die we will

remember that it was not fair

So many, all heros, had to die

so that we can have

someone's name to

Put on walls and

Honor in the parades

to sell...IT... war

To the Next ones

to do and do and

die

Peace and condolences to all

Who have served and given

And for the loss of so much
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 11, 2014 - 07:19pm PT
TWO TIMBUKTU POETRY CONTEST
by Sam Peeps

Ivy Leaguer's version:

"Slowly across the desert sand
Trekked the dusty caravan.
Men on camels, two by two
Destination -- Timbuktu."

Redneck version, SE Alabama A&M:

"Tim and me, a-huntin' went.
Met three whores in a pop-up tent.
They was three, we was two,
So I bucked one and Timbuktu."

And so to bed.

mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 16, 2014 - 09:55pm PT
CALAVERASS?
Starring Em and Brutus

Sweat trickles down arms shaking from fear as I climb the
serrated dikes and free-crimp-lakeyshegged past the A2 grungy
placements, pawing the edge of the crack, point-toeing up the
serrations in a teetering, balancy gibbet- dance until I pull
into a belay slab with flared grungy placements and set up an
elaborate redundant, equalized, and backed-up anchor system
utilizing three cordelettes and 8 pieces of protection.
--Brutus of Wyde

Thank you, man.
Thank you, too, ma'am. :0)


PLANE OF HEAVEN (or Tea of Heaven is timely, too.)
It's autumn. Trees of Heaven are turning red all over.
The tree of heaven has a distinct odor, an unpleasant one, but a natural one.
The tea from heaven had a distinct odor, but a pleasant one, a natural one, too.
But it was, some, tainted by av-gas, and would not burn too readily. Many men wasted their selves, then forgot the joint, which had gone out. It is the price you pay for free weed.

But the parties it engendered, some of them...were not up to Flames standards.

Here is a tribute to the ingenuity of the Yosemite Climber of the seventies.

Choose yer own tune, then

Break out the uke
Drink until you puke
The ditties are all dirty
The women are all purty
And we have a ton of weed

The Teton Tea's a-brewin'
I don't know what yer a-doin'
But the harsh-mellows are a-toastin'
We're all here a-boastin'
That we've got a ton of weed

It came out of the lake
T'was there for us to take
And take it all we did
Oh, WAY more than a lid
Yeah, man...we found a ton of weed

The coals are dark and red
It must be time for bed
But before we all are done
Let's roll another one
Cuz we have a ton of weed (It's really top drawer)

Yeah, we got a ton of weed (And it's all home-grown)

Oh yeah, we've smoked a ton of weed (Are we done yet?)

Baked on a ton of weed (We're really toasted)

Love smokin' weed every day (It's good for you-ou-ou)

God bless Ireland! God bless Poland! God bless Finland. God bless Iceland. God bless the Himalaya...wait...huh?
"Are you still smoking that stuff, Brian? What about the promises you made? The hearts you hurt? I'm talking to you..."

One that Nita sent that week, early November. Thanks, chica.
http://www.supertopo.com/climbing/thread.php?topic_id=1973718&tn=0

Where Have YOU Gone?

To where the streets are nameless
And the residents are blameless
It's always been famous
For the sweet sweet afterlife
Remember
OREGON STREET
LIBERTY STREET
MARYAL DRIVE
FITCH WAY
OLIVE AVENUE
Cradle to the grave
I was never so brave
As my dad
My dad
So sad
He never got too mad
He drank
I have proof
[Click to View YouTube Video]
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Nov 28, 2014 - 09:34pm PT
Ultra-thanks to jimthomsen for supplying us with a Dolt poetry fix.

Something for THE Muppet to memorize.


There is a land I dearly know
Of rock and ice and snow
Where the wind, the clouds, the sky,
Oh, how they make me feel so high.

My hands, my feet,
My eyes, my ears,
I feel, I tread,
I see, I hear,
Mountains!

There is a land of rock and ice and snow
To which I always long to go
Where storms’ thunder and lightning
A silent fear kindled and frightening

My pulse, my breath,
My thought, my all,
I’m in tune
With Earth’s
Mountains!


This is a
Desert
Wetted by rain
Clothed in soft light
Brushed in
Pastel

Awake and
You’ll see
A misty
Rainbow
Born of the
Sun and
Seeded by drops
Of sparkling
Rain

Look to the
Heavens
Raise up your
Brow
Full of thanks
Feel as you wish
This is your
Earth and mine
For it
I am Grateful
tom Carter

Social climber
Dec 1, 2014 - 11:57pm PT
Anybody remember a poem Chinese? About hanging the moon in every branch of a tree?

I have tried to track it down but have failed. Wondering....?
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Dec 2, 2014 - 12:33am PT
Nope. All I know is "Turtle on Fencepost." A raga.
A cherry tree branch in full bloom

is hiding the brightly shining moon-

I want to cut the moon-hiding branch,

but at the same time I hate to do so,

because the branch with its blossoms is so beautiful.

An example of maekuzuke poetry, haiku with 31 syllables in Japanese, as I understand it.

But it's Japanese, not Chinese.
mouse from merced

Trad climber
The finger of fate, my friends, is fickle.
Dec 2, 2014 - 07:12am PT
The rain has come overnight.

With the dark pre-dawn comes sound to match the light.

Dark sounds they are compared

To rain.

But warm sounds all the same.

The heating unit mounted in my wall

And the generator at City Hall

Compete.

One is in my face the other across the street

Civil servants fire it up each week

In an emergency they'll at least have light

And heat.

I am toasty warm and my room is lit

But I hear the rain say neither pitter-pit

Nor pitter-pat as it hits the ground, it seems, with

No sound.

So as the silent night has grown

Loudly I lament the way we no longer hear

Aboriginally but by aural

Subterfuge.

If it's not for the car's tires

Kicking up rooster-tails behind

I swear that I'd go out of

My mind.

I could not tell if it were raining

If not for this distinct song,

One I've come to recognize all my life long

And love.

Motors and engines surround'

Unnatural sounds abound

And will be worse after I'm not around

Anymore.

Don't forget the street sweepers' broom

Its day is lost way in the gloom

I can hear its replacement from my room.

You're doomed...

To be warm and clean and dry and safe and well-lit and contented behind your ear-pods next to your India Pale Ale, you SNAG.

And you won't hear the leaf blowers cranking up, either.






Fossil climber

Trad climber
Atlin, B. C.
Dec 2, 2014 - 11:42am PT
Just discovered a Japanese poetry form called tanka. Had to try it.

==

WINTER COMING


hard frost furs the roof

north breeze hurries mist southward

I blink sleep away

savoring rich coffee scent

planning now for coming snow

***

berries turn dark now

loosen and drop from the canes

the freezer is full

there are too many berries

it’s so hard to let them fall

***


garden is brown now

frost crisp on mulch and dry weeds

hang up rake and hoe

rub linseed oil on maple shafts

keep a shovel out for snow

***


aspen’s gold has flown

greyness owns the earth and sky

colors have gone south

snow can not come soon enough

white will light our world again


***

dark limbs wave helpless

naked against a grey sky

arguing with wind

winter flows cold from the north

dry limbs crackle in the stove

***


the first flakes drift in

perch on the deck and cling there

I search the closet

wool and fleece and warm gloves yes -

the down can wait another month


***

all is white at dawn

new snow muffles earth and sound

turn from the window

sense the skis in the rafters

waiting for that first long glide


***

put back the new skis

lacking soul of living wood

pull down the wood skis

torch in the bubbling pine tar

inhale taste of winters past


***
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